Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Feedback Addendum

Hi again everyone,

I'm not sure what happened...I typed out more feedback on the Edu Challenges section, but Floyd pointed out that I didn't have much to say below.

Basically, this section looks good in terms of content, but I do think it needs some editing, because there's a bit of repetition. For instance, I believe cyber-bullying is discussed twice. You might also consider how this section is organized--some of the Discipline info could fit under Student Behaviors, and vice versa.

Okay, I think that's it. Let me know if there are any questions and sorry for the confusion.
Jeff

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